Nicole
http://themumreviews.co.uk

This is good advice. I'm taking a writing class atm and there is a lot of talk about "show, don't tell" but not much so far about how to craft a coherent story. Maybe that doesn't fall into the "beginner" class. Two unrelated points: (1) this is the first time I've had something to enter in the wheresya blog box and this pleases me. (2) the captcha is no longer scrotum and this displeases me. x

Michael

1) Awesome! Heard you've been picked up all over the place! 2) Yeah, sorry - minor tragedy there. But my mum kept having to type 'scrotum'! That sunk it. 8^)

Re: story - start (and very nearly finish) here: https://www.amazon.co.uk/d/cka/Story-Substance-Structure-Principles-Screenwriting-Robert-McKee/0060856181

xxm